# SHEP Bar Prep - Review Palette Pull quotes for outreach emails, landing page, and institutional pitches. Each quote is standalone and can be used independently. --- ## Student Quotes ### From Minni Osaga (maosaga@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE > **1.** "I'm so glad I found it." > **2.** "I love it and the drills too. I really really like it!!" > **3.** "I really really like it!!" > **4.** "Did my first essay and it caught exactly what I keep getting marked down for. I mean with the first essay!" > **5.** "Shep is really good." ### From Iryna (irynarid@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, LL.M. Retaker > **6.** "I like fast grading ... [t]hank you for working on this app to help others." ### From Intesar (intesarsarama95@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker > **7.** "The repetition of the rules is amazing. I paid and signed up. It is really good." ### From Cuong Huynh (cuongh14@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker > **8.** "This is amazing. Literally exactly what I was looking for." ### From Minni Osaga (maosaga@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker (extended review) > **17.** "Just signed up for Shep bar and so far so good. I like how it breaks down the essay answers and shows you exactly what you missed and how you could have made it better. It also emphasizes the laws that you should have put on your essay. I have been down this road a couple times and figured why not, it won't hurt to try it and I have no regrets. I am taking the bar in July. I like it and I trust I'll make it this time." ### From u/Key-Cauliflower-7916 - Reddit r/barexam, Retaker > **18.** "I just signed up as well! Very excited to dive in. So far it has been extremely helpful and enforces the missed rules by re-writing them 3x. As a retaker, this is exactly what is needed!" ### From Christine Richardson - Paying Student > **19.** "I like the program thus far. I can tell that a lot of thought went into this." ### From Intesar (intesarsarama95@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker > **20.** "You've created something that is a game changer for someone like me." ### From Cuong Huynh (cuongh14@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker > **21.** "The feedback is amazing. Thank you!" ### From Intesar (intesarsarama95@gmail.com) - Paying Student, MEE, Retaker > **22.** "I just read the biz org essay. Wow it is so helpful. I am mind blown at how small changes could change my entire grade." > **23.** "I guess I never had my writing dissected enough for improvement." ### From u/Some_Culture3979 - Reddit r/barexam > **24.** "I really do enjoy this program. Thank you." ### From u/blueizzzz - Reddit r/barexam > **25.** "I have loved shep bar prep so far. I just started with them but I will say that I love the way they personally respond back to any questions that I have or suggestions I make. It's definitely worth trying it out since the price is SO MUCH lower than the cookie cutter bar prep companies." ### From u/Only_Variation_6008 - Reddit r/barexam > **26.** "I signed up today and like your program better than trying to make my own flashcards (I work full time). It's going to be a tremendous help with memorization." ### From Matthew Tringali (mtringali1@pride.hofstra.edu) - Trial User, MEE, Hofstra Law > **27.** "I enjoyed your product and think it is a novel idea, especially with the repetition. I definitely think it is helpful." --- ## Editorial Copy (behavioral proof, not attributed quotes) > **9.** "One student converted from demo to purchase in 5 minutes. She immediately wrote a 41-minute Civil Procedure essay." > *Source: jlagrone26, Atlanta's John Marshall Law School, May 13* > **10.** "A student who purchased at 8 PM wrote a 79-minute Contracts essay that same night - her first time using the platform." > *Source: Osaga, May 14* > **11.** "One of our trial users wrote Torts essays until 6 AM on her first night." > *Source: castillojessika, activated via email, May 12-13* > **12.** "A student did the free demo at 5 AM, activated the trial, and purchased 6 hours later." > *Source: intesarsarama95, May 14* --- ## Platform Stats > **13.** "265+ essays scored. 20-second feedback time. 0 grading errors on rule accuracy." > **14.** "3 exam modules live: MEE, Florida, California." > **15.** "Rubric-scored feedback across five dimensions modeled on NCBE grading guidelines." > **16.** "Built by a Fordham Law graduate who passed the February 2026 UBE." --- ## Polished Versions (used in repair emails May 15) > "I did my first essay and it caught exactly what my professors always tell me. I love the drill feature too. Really glad I found this." - Minni Osaga, MEE student > "I tried the free demo and bought full access five minutes later. The feedback on my Civ Pro essay was more specific than anything I got from my prep course." - J.L., law student > "I uploaded my own question and wrote three essays in one sitting. The issue-by-issue breakdown shows you exactly where to improve." - Intesar, MEE student --- ## How to Use These **For student-facing emails (leads, trial users):** Quotes 2, 4, 7, 8 are strongest. Students relate to "what I keep getting marked down for" and "literally exactly what I was looking for." Iryna's quote (6) adds credibility from an LL.M. retaker. **For institutional pitches (law school admins):** Quotes 6, 7, 8 (named students with context), editorial copy 9-12 (engagement metrics), stats 13-16. Admins care about engagement and credibility. **For landing page / social proof section:** Quotes 3, 5, 8 with first name only. Keep it short. Add stat 13 as a credibility bar. **For the "demand is growing / prices going up" email:** Lead with quotes 7, 8 (student voice showing enthusiasm), then editorial 9-12 (behavioral proof), close with stat 13.